Players That run out their Contracts For a Huge pay Day?
We have Seen lots of Players manipulate there clubs by playing out their contracts and cashing in huge pay days by getting a kick back from the club they sign for because that club didnt have to pay a huge transfer fee. The Biggest one that comes to mind was Sol Campbell to Arsenal. Im a Newcastle Fan and i Think micheal owen is a Snake, We paid 17 million pounds to Nurse a player back to fitness and just as he is getting back into his Stride hes now Waiting the days out for his big Pay Day Move. To Be Fair Noone can blame him, Hes obviously has No Heart for The newcastle Team but why should it be Newcastles Problem if he ditched Liverpool and went tits up At Madrid . There was a Obvious Overload of Strikers at real madrid so its not like he didnt know it was going to happen. My Question is should there be some rule brought in that stops players For Frauding clubs in this way?
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No because that's part of Football in a way what would football be with out controversy? things like this make the Transfer windows exciteing and unpredictable , gives us fans to something to talk about for a while " was it for the right reasons" "how will he do" etc etc if this didn't happen , a huge part of football wouldn't exist.
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Friday, September 28, 2012
Friday, September 14, 2012
Can somebody give an HONEST assessment of this
Can somebody give an HONEST assessment of this!?
It is for a story, tell me what you think of it- Of Alexandra VII's three children, the youngest, Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok- known variously to political writers of his own time as "Roger the Terrible," "Roger the Mad," "the Tyrant," The Restorer," and even "The Kin-Slayer"- did not begin his career as the most promising material the famed MacClintock Dynasty had ever produced. Alexandra's child by Lazar Fillip, the sixth Ear of New Madrid, whom she never marreid, the then-Prince Roger was widely regarded prior to the Adoula Coup as an overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop.It was widely known within court circles that his mother nursed serious reservations about his reliability and was actively disappointed by his indolent, self-centered neglect of those duties and responsibilites which attached to his position as Heir Tertiary to the Throne of Man.Less widely known, although scarcely secret, was her lingering distrust of his loyalty Whatcha think
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good
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What??????????????????????????????????????????????
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honestly i dont like it, but not because of the writing thats really good but i not into those type of stoties
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Bad grammar, and the thing about the son makes no sense. Otherwise, it could be good for people who like these types of stories.
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You should join www.gather.com and post your work if you're looking for readers and comments. They pay you for posting working, getting friends to join, commenting on other people's work. It's like a mini-myspace for "writers".
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Not good. It sounds like you aren't comfortable with that particular style of writing. If you're determined to use that style you'd do yourself a favor by reading a couple of good books written in the same style. It will familiarize you with what you're attempting and save you time and frustration in the long run.
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very interesting introduction- maybe go a little slower with it?? I had to read it twice to make sense of it. Maybe introduce Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok a little differently, then go into the family history later. Is it supposed to be "MacClintock" or "MacClintok"? Also, "the sixth Ear"? Don't you mean "Earl"? I do like your description of this Roger, though: "overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop." Maybe find a different phrase for "clothes-conscious" though. It doesn't quite sound correct. Hope this helps, and good luck with the story.
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Too many convoluted names at the beginning of the story. It's a turn off. When you start a story--ANY STORY--make sure something is happening. It doesn't matter what: just make sure it's SOMETHING. And cut the pretentious sounding names out. All you're doing is confusing the reader.
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Writing tip: Don't use phrase "his mother nursed" unless you are talking about nursing. Maybe "his mother harbored".
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Plagiarism is a bad thing. John Ringo and David Weber may have something to say about this if they are ever notified. Although if you frequent Baen's Books on the web you will find that the authors themselves frequent this site to get input on their novels, series' and just plain talking about their works. The only other thing I have to say is that if you ask John Ringo and David Weber if they are ever going to have a fifth book that gives everything closure?
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It is for a story, tell me what you think of it- Of Alexandra VII's three children, the youngest, Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok- known variously to political writers of his own time as "Roger the Terrible," "Roger the Mad," "the Tyrant," The Restorer," and even "The Kin-Slayer"- did not begin his career as the most promising material the famed MacClintock Dynasty had ever produced. Alexandra's child by Lazar Fillip, the sixth Ear of New Madrid, whom she never marreid, the then-Prince Roger was widely regarded prior to the Adoula Coup as an overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop.It was widely known within court circles that his mother nursed serious reservations about his reliability and was actively disappointed by his indolent, self-centered neglect of those duties and responsibilites which attached to his position as Heir Tertiary to the Throne of Man.Less widely known, although scarcely secret, was her lingering distrust of his loyalty Whatcha think
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good
2 :
What??????????????????????????????????????????????
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honestly i dont like it, but not because of the writing thats really good but i not into those type of stoties
4 :
Bad grammar, and the thing about the son makes no sense. Otherwise, it could be good for people who like these types of stories.
5 :
You should join www.gather.com and post your work if you're looking for readers and comments. They pay you for posting working, getting friends to join, commenting on other people's work. It's like a mini-myspace for "writers".
6 :
Not good. It sounds like you aren't comfortable with that particular style of writing. If you're determined to use that style you'd do yourself a favor by reading a couple of good books written in the same style. It will familiarize you with what you're attempting and save you time and frustration in the long run.
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very interesting introduction- maybe go a little slower with it?? I had to read it twice to make sense of it. Maybe introduce Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok a little differently, then go into the family history later. Is it supposed to be "MacClintock" or "MacClintok"? Also, "the sixth Ear"? Don't you mean "Earl"? I do like your description of this Roger, though: "overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop." Maybe find a different phrase for "clothes-conscious" though. It doesn't quite sound correct. Hope this helps, and good luck with the story.
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Too many convoluted names at the beginning of the story. It's a turn off. When you start a story--ANY STORY--make sure something is happening. It doesn't matter what: just make sure it's SOMETHING. And cut the pretentious sounding names out. All you're doing is confusing the reader.
9 :
Writing tip: Don't use phrase "his mother nursed" unless you are talking about nursing. Maybe "his mother harbored".
10 :
Plagiarism is a bad thing. John Ringo and David Weber may have something to say about this if they are ever notified. Although if you frequent Baen's Books on the web you will find that the authors themselves frequent this site to get input on their novels, series' and just plain talking about their works. The only other thing I have to say is that if you ask John Ringo and David Weber if they are ever going to have a fifth book that gives everything closure?
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Friday, September 7, 2012
Tell me what you think of this, I wrote it.
Tell me what you think of this, I wrote it.?
It is for a story, tell me what you think of it- Of Alexandra VII's three children, the youngest, Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok- known variously to political writers of his own time as "Roger the Terrible," "Roger the Mad," "the Tyrant," The Restorer," and even "The Kin-Slayer"- did not begin his career as the most promising material the famed MacClintock Dynasty had ever produced. Alexandra's child by Lazar Fillip, the sixth Ear of New Madrid, whom she never marreid, the then-Prince Roger was widely regarded prior to the Adoula Coup as an overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop. It was widely known within court circles that his mother nursed serious reservations about his reliability and was actively disappointed by his indolent, self-centered neglect of those duties and responsibilites which attached to his position as Heir Tertiary to the Throne of Man. Less widely known, althouugh scarcely secret, was her lingering distrust of his loyalty. As such, it was perhaps not unreasonable, when the "Playboy Prince" and his bodyguard (Bravo Company, Bronze Battalion, of the Empress' Own Regiment) disappearned enroute to a routine flag-showing ceremony only motnhs before an attack upon the Imperial Palace, that suspicion should turn to him.
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i'm confused.
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Interesting - you've got great details in here describing Prince Roger. The one thing I, as a reader, would appreciate is less wordiness--slow it down. You are cramming a lot of important details into one paragraph. As I read through it, this sounds like you are trying to say as much about this world as you can in one breath. Long sentences are not bad, but it is nice to space them out with short ones for emphasis. I like to think of it in comparison to a roller-coaster. You go up and down. If the rails were all at the same height, the coaster would be boring. Similarly--long information-packed sentences followed by long information-packed sentences can bore or overload the reader. Keep the detail, but read it out loud to yourself and don't be afraid to slow it down.
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You'll choke your readers to distraction if you write 'so much' back off a tad, and give little portions instead. Readers aren't fools they will follow where you lead them, if they like your style, just let them use their imagination. You do write well, just a tad over-the-top. Good writing.
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You obviously Love Words and are quite capable of firing off a string of flavorful adjectives, but what you might have missed is the effect your words are having on your reader. If you really want to capture the reader's interest, EDIT and READ over and over and over until you've accomplished the practice of re-writing. In re-writing, remember to consider your READER instead of your love affair with all of these words. From another Word Lover, I understand your plight in omitting those wondrous adjectives, but I've come to understand that even though I'm writing for myself - if I expect anyone else to read my writing with appreciation for what I'm saying, then I must fine tune the words and phrases in a way that will give the reader comprehension of what I'm attempting to portray. If a reader can't understand or empathize with the writer's portrait, then they will walk away unmoved and unable to pick up the piece again with that feeling of zest that should be felt when taking time to read.
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Forget it. It's verbose self-regarding piffle.
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It is for a story, tell me what you think of it- Of Alexandra VII's three children, the youngest, Roger Ramius Sergei Alexander Chiang MacClintok- known variously to political writers of his own time as "Roger the Terrible," "Roger the Mad," "the Tyrant," The Restorer," and even "The Kin-Slayer"- did not begin his career as the most promising material the famed MacClintock Dynasty had ever produced. Alexandra's child by Lazar Fillip, the sixth Ear of New Madrid, whom she never marreid, the then-Prince Roger was widely regarded prior to the Adoula Coup as an overly handsome, self-centered, clothes-consious fop. It was widely known within court circles that his mother nursed serious reservations about his reliability and was actively disappointed by his indolent, self-centered neglect of those duties and responsibilites which attached to his position as Heir Tertiary to the Throne of Man. Less widely known, althouugh scarcely secret, was her lingering distrust of his loyalty. As such, it was perhaps not unreasonable, when the "Playboy Prince" and his bodyguard (Bravo Company, Bronze Battalion, of the Empress' Own Regiment) disappearned enroute to a routine flag-showing ceremony only motnhs before an attack upon the Imperial Palace, that suspicion should turn to him.
Books & Authors - 5 Answers
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i'm confused.
2 :
Interesting - you've got great details in here describing Prince Roger. The one thing I, as a reader, would appreciate is less wordiness--slow it down. You are cramming a lot of important details into one paragraph. As I read through it, this sounds like you are trying to say as much about this world as you can in one breath. Long sentences are not bad, but it is nice to space them out with short ones for emphasis. I like to think of it in comparison to a roller-coaster. You go up and down. If the rails were all at the same height, the coaster would be boring. Similarly--long information-packed sentences followed by long information-packed sentences can bore or overload the reader. Keep the detail, but read it out loud to yourself and don't be afraid to slow it down.
3 :
You'll choke your readers to distraction if you write 'so much' back off a tad, and give little portions instead. Readers aren't fools they will follow where you lead them, if they like your style, just let them use their imagination. You do write well, just a tad over-the-top. Good writing.
4 :
You obviously Love Words and are quite capable of firing off a string of flavorful adjectives, but what you might have missed is the effect your words are having on your reader. If you really want to capture the reader's interest, EDIT and READ over and over and over until you've accomplished the practice of re-writing. In re-writing, remember to consider your READER instead of your love affair with all of these words. From another Word Lover, I understand your plight in omitting those wondrous adjectives, but I've come to understand that even though I'm writing for myself - if I expect anyone else to read my writing with appreciation for what I'm saying, then I must fine tune the words and phrases in a way that will give the reader comprehension of what I'm attempting to portray. If a reader can't understand or empathize with the writer's portrait, then they will walk away unmoved and unable to pick up the piece again with that feeling of zest that should be felt when taking time to read.
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Forget it. It's verbose self-regarding piffle.
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Saturday, September 1, 2012
Athletic Trainer vs. Physical Therapist
Athletic Trainer vs. Physical Therapist?
I'm just wondering, what EXACTLY is the difference between the two? How are both jobs performed? What degrees would I need for either job? How long would I need to attend college? Is it just the standard four years? What are some colleges that offer the two as a major? The only decent college I could find so far was Boston University. (Do any UC schools offer these as majors?) Also, what are the chances of getting on a pro team (ie: Barca, Real Madrid, Milan, etc)? And how do I apply / get an internship in those teams? I'm thinking about double majoring in one of those two and in nursing, then getting a degree in acupuncture. Does this seem like a good idea? Sorry for a bombardment of questions. It's time to apply for colleges, you see. x]
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ATC treat athletic injuries and work on the field. PT treat everything from pediatrics to geriatrics. They treat disease states. PT treat disease in musculoskeletal, neurological, integument, and cardiopulmonary. PT make more money, go to school longer, and work in a variety of settings--hospitals, nursing homes, rehab facilities, schools, homes, outpatient clinics. PT work more regular hours. ATC treat during games--nights and weekends. You can do both. PT is a graduate degree. ATC can be a BS degree www.apta.org www.nata.org
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I'm just wondering, what EXACTLY is the difference between the two? How are both jobs performed? What degrees would I need for either job? How long would I need to attend college? Is it just the standard four years? What are some colleges that offer the two as a major? The only decent college I could find so far was Boston University. (Do any UC schools offer these as majors?) Also, what are the chances of getting on a pro team (ie: Barca, Real Madrid, Milan, etc)? And how do I apply / get an internship in those teams? I'm thinking about double majoring in one of those two and in nursing, then getting a degree in acupuncture. Does this seem like a good idea? Sorry for a bombardment of questions. It's time to apply for colleges, you see. x]
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ATC treat athletic injuries and work on the field. PT treat everything from pediatrics to geriatrics. They treat disease states. PT treat disease in musculoskeletal, neurological, integument, and cardiopulmonary. PT make more money, go to school longer, and work in a variety of settings--hospitals, nursing homes, rehab facilities, schools, homes, outpatient clinics. PT work more regular hours. ATC treat during games--nights and weekends. You can do both. PT is a graduate degree. ATC can be a BS degree www.apta.org www.nata.org
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